| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
URL |
Thumb |
|
|
Embed |
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
|
Sta.sh
Another thing to keep in mind is the values of large shapes. You should have the lightest value in shadows still darker than the darkest value in light. To make a dramatic lighting, reserve the lightest tone to only a few spots, and then add some blur to the brightest spots to make it glow.
If the dragon is facing in that direction, his right wing should be higher than his left, not lower. His left hand under the girl looks a little "slacked off on", as in you just tried to hide it, and looks a bit smaller than his right. In other words, we should kinda see his fingers through hers. The bottom of his tail looks like it's flat as paper going through the rocks like that. His right arm looks rather desaturated and smudgy.
The girl's upper body is rather weird. Where's her right shoulder? If you were to draw a symmetry line through her body, her neck and head are off-center. Her fingers are a bit...claylike? It's as if they don't have bones and can move inany direction. Her right arm looks like it's so much longer if her elbow is that far down compared to her left.
The clouds in the background are kinda rushed. Adding more depth to them makes the image more appealing.
I hope this helps